Loathsome Gargoyle

Watched a bunch of clips on youtube of Michael Turner, Adam Hughes, and Jim Lee sketching, and decided I should draw a scene from Phantom of the Opera in comic book form.
The picture kinda looks crowded to me now...but I don't know what I could do to fix that.

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Damn you!
You little prying
Pandora!
You little demon - is this what you wanted to see?

Curse you!
You little lying Delilah!
You little viper - now you cannot ever be free!

Damn you ...
Curse you ...

Stranger than you dreamt it -
can you even dare to look or bear to
think of me:
this loathsome gargoyle, who
burns in hell, but secretly yearns for heaven,
secretly ...
secretly ...

But, Christine ...

Fear can
Turn to love - you'll learn to see,
to find the man behind the monster: this ...
repulsive carcass, who seems a beast, but secretly dreams of beauty,
secretly ...
secretly ...

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Phantom belongs to Andrew Lloyd Webber!